"One Night" A Poem By Dineo Motlokwa.

There's a fresh, vibrant poet in town, and her name is Dineo Motlokwa. This 25-year-old talent, hailing from Pretoria North, Amandasig, is set to take the literary world by storm. Armed with a Business Management degree and a Fundza fellowship, Dineo weaves magic through her words, as she spins tales of love, passion, and the beauty of life.




In her captivating poem, "One Night," Dineo takes us on a sensory journey through a midnight rendezvous. She paints a vivid, romantic scene using poetic imagery that tantalizes our imagination:

•"One night, it was midnight and silent / Candles to set the room with ambience." - Here, Dineo sets the stage for the intimate encounter with the contrast between silence and the sensual ambience created by the candlelight.

•"Rose petals on the floor, / The wind outside blowing the curtain." - The delicate image of rose petals and the gentle breeze further enhances the scene's romantic atmosphere.

•"Her eyes looked straight into my eyes / As if she really felt my heartbeat." - Dineo skillfully captures the electric connection between two lovers, using the gaze as a powerful, visceral symbol.

The poem progresses with lines that reveal the depth of the speaker's feelings:

•"I took more steps towards her to feel / Her skin." - This visceral, intimate moment invites us into the lovers' shared vulnerability and desire.

•"She smiled and opened her / Beautiful eyes. I Said you are my sunshine / You bring light into my life / As this candles do in this room." - Here, Dineo employs a vivid metaphor, comparing her lover's presence to the warmth and light provided by the sun and candles.


"One Night" A Poem By Dineo Motlokwa.

One night, it was midnight and silent Candles to set the room with ambience.

Rose petals on the floor,

The wind outside blowing the curtain.

The night felt so peaceful.

The sheets were red my lover came from another room coming to our bedroom Wearing a night red dress.

I took a glimpse she smiled.

Her eyes looked straight into my eyes As if she really felt my heartbeat.

How I feel for her,I have never felt like this before.

She came walking slowly towards me and hold my hand Put in on her Beautiful face. 

I looked at her in the eyes She closed them, I got smitten.

I took more steps towards her to feel Her skin.

She smiled and opened her Beautiful eyes. 

I Said you are my sunshine You bring light into my life As this candles do in this room.

Your aura brightens my day,

I Kissed her passionately while close to her.

Soft skin smelling like roses, 

Our heart beats sinked in together;She completes me.

Dineo showcases her exceptional ability to evoke emotions, paint vivid imagery, and convey the transcendent power of love. She is a rising star of South African poetry, and we're on the edge of our seats, anticipating her next masterpiece. Keep your eyes on this fresh, dynamic voice - Dineo Motlokwa is destined for literary greatness!


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